Proofread My Penn Optional?

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I am stuck in a dilemma right now because I wrote this rather unconventional poem for my Penn Optional Supplement. However, I am not sure if it is appropriate. If anyone is willing to read it for me I wold be really grateful for your help!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Sounds interesting to me. PM me and I’d proofread.</p>

<p>PM me and I’ll read.</p>

<p>Anyone else? bummp.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.</p>

<p>send it on over! I sent all my materials last week.</p>

<p>Really would appreciate any more feedback!!!</p>

<p>Yeah!! Send me :)</p>

<p>I’ll look over it if you can proofread mine and tell me what you think. :slight_smile: It’s somewhat unconventional but still essentially an essay.</p>

<p>I will. Can you proofread mine as well?</p>

<p>@Heretic and IBAus: I sent you visitor messages. :slight_smile: if you want to PM me, feel free!</p>

<p>PM me :slight_smile: sent in my app last week!</p>

<p>Sent it to all of you!</p>

<p>Don’t worry, they want people who aren’t afraid to stand out from the crowd. It is also a good way to distinguish yourself. I would love to read it.</p>

<p>PM me:) I could proofread it for u too ^^</p>

<p>I will read…pm me</p>

<p>Thanks for all your help! I have chosen to send in my poem, and I’ve just submitted today.
Again, really grateful for all your feedback!</p>