Proofread my personal essay?

<p>It’s about all the hardships and tragedies I’ve witnessed and endured and how I’ve persevered. Would anyone be willing to give it a look?</p>

<p>Hey I’d love to read it if you want!</p>

<p>ill read it for you</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>ill take a look too</p>