Proofread my SUNY Personal Statement PLEASE

<p>I’m a poor writer and need some review for grammar checks and I would love some feedback on if my work produces any negative impression on me. Thanks in advance, much appreciated!</p>

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<p>Prompt:
Personal Circumstances. Please provide additional information (up to 250 words) that will help us better understand your academic performance. You may also use this space to explain any chronological gaps in your academic history (e.g. a period of time after high school graduation before applying to college).</p>

<p>Throughout my academic career I’ve had some problems and issues that may of hindered my education. My attendance for one has several sick days throughout a school year due to the seasonal flu and stomach complications. A special case was roughly a year or two before where I had to take a few days off to pay respect at my grandfather’s funeral in China. On the subject of my curriculum, I wasn’t informed of advanced courses in my early high school years, only having what was given to me. However my senior year I have attempted to take all the advanced placement courses available, being recommended by previous teachers to both AP Calculus and AP Biology. I was ineligible to take AP U.S History in my school due to having taken the U.S History regents and U.S History class already in freshmen year. My social studies teacher told me that I had to take Global History and Government instead. My school has limited activities and rigorous courses available. My lacks of activities are due to the limited clubs and choices available at my school and my disinterest in the school’s student government system and honor society. Also residing in a secluded neighborhood gave me little opportunities for community engagement. </p>

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<p>Don’t post things like this online please. I’m sure you have plenty of people in your area whom you could ask to proofread your essay. Now get out.</p>

<p>… dick</p>