Proofread one of my UC essays plz!

[ilonachka]

<p>any pointers or opinions wouldbe very helpful:)
thanks</p>

[azngamer54]

<p>If you are still awake, I will read your essay. No homework tonight :]</p>

[gery_sun]

<p>I am ready to help. PM me</p>

[ilonachka]

<p>hey just wondering ^, are you an 08er?</p>

[Dip]

<p>Send me a PM</p>