I had a professor read over my draft and she made a suggestion to be specific in a certain area, I’m currently on break and I don’t think I’ll hear back from her until after the vacation. Could someone read it over to tell me if I was specific enough and answered the prompt well? Thanks.
I’ll help you out if your teacher hasn’t still replied yet. if she has then i’d suggest go with her suggestions since she is a professor and probably has more knowledge haha