"Proud to be Boricua"-Common App Essay (Topic of Choice) -More Critique, the better!!

<p>I wrote an essay about being Boricua in the South (Afro-Puerto Rican) but I tried not be cliched with it, it has elements I don’t think you could possible find in any other essay these days. </p>

<p>Is there someone that could possibly be willing to read my essay? I have a bad feeling about it, and I need some confidence boosting! I feel like I did something wrong with it…
Any help is much appreciated! :)</p>

<p>me!! i would like to help</p>

<p>I’ll be willing to, can you critique mine as well?</p>