Question about the essay

<p>Ok so I’m reading about admission essays and it suggested that I avoid cynicism. </p>

<p>For the umich essay about a national concern, I wrote about an issue with a type of prescription drug and how that’s an important concern to me. </p>

<p>I just need to know if thats being too cynical and if that’s too controversial.</p>

<p>cynicism…hmm…it depends which drug i guess, and id say that a medicine issue is definitely a viable national issue, right? Im not sure, I wrote mine about “Journalistic Integrity” which is a little out on a limb because its not a HUGE issue but I defended it, i think! lol</p>

<p>anyways, how long is yours? do you think its ok if mines like 540 words?</p>

<p>Yeah I think you’re fine. Mine was also 540 words. Gawd I feel kind of screwed here. I only have a week until school starts, and I’m still waiting for that spark of inspiration. My essay is way too average.</p>

<p>umichope, i can’t imagine you’re essay being too average. Mine was the most rote and boring essay you’ll ever read and I got in with lots of money.</p>

<p>Post it! But arent you the guy that took like a million AP classes? That leads me to beleive that you got your money that way.</p>

<p>But dude if you are talking about how ang****l teenagers pop paxil like advil, then that is way to cynical, in my opinion.</p>

<p>^^^^^^^^^^^LOL this forum has like digital police of vice and virtue, because it took out the s-t-f-u from a-n-g-s-t-f-u-l ! lol!</p>

<p>hahaha ok what does **** stand for</p>

<p>EDIT: ^^^ ***??</p>

<p>they took out the s-t-f-u from the world a-n-g-s-t-f-u-l. Thats what fills in the stars. This forum software really needs to grow up. Get invision or something!</p>

<p>It has nothing to do with the forum software. I think the profanity filter is a hack they installed. vBulletin pwns Invision Board.</p>