<p>The essay is my weak part. I got a 72 on the mult. choice and the score of a 9 took it down to 690. I need to know good examples that can be used about on every test.
Here are some.
Roaring twenties through TGD
TR
MLKJR
Battle of bull run ( I don’t get this one… how is this supposed to be good)
From literature
LOTF (very overused, i know but… still)
TTG (same as lotf)
The grapes of wrath
Invisible man (i found this one as a the absolute perfect example in one of my practice essays so thats why i put this).
Can someone give me some other examples and things like so that can almost be used always on the test?
Also does anyone know a good site for common maxims? (I.E. Honesty is the best policy. History repeats itself).
Thanks again.</p>
<p>Like for instance take this one
What motivates people to change (the essay topic)
This is how I start out the essay now.</p>
<pre><code> Newton’s 3rd law of motion states that for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. This holds true for what motivates people to change. If a person gets distressed or upset then (I won’t actually put this part but this is the “action”) they will be motivated to change to placate that stress. (the opposite reaction).
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<p>Does this seem like fine for an intro. paragraph or is it too strange… thanks for the insight</p>