<p>While meeting new people, I usually get an awkward stare.</p>
<p>Usually, when meeting some people…</p>
<p>I don’t know how to fix my first sentence, the rest of my essay is done now, but my first sentence is a disaster, HELP?</p>
<p>bump, bump? how to make sentence not sound weird or out of place?</p>
<p>lead with awkward stare it is powerfu</p>
<p>try -
an awkward stare is the typical first time greeting i receive</p>
<p>But it is not the first thin they notice, it is usually a little in to conversation, it is hard to explain. So they don’t greet me with the reaction</p>
<p>i think i can help better if you supply the second sentence?</p>
<p>This is the rest of paragraph if that helps, the first sentence must have something to do with multiple people because rest of paragraph says “they”. Any other help in fixing my first paragraph.</p>
<p>They take a second glance, straight into my eyes, making sure they aren’t mistaken. Finally, they muster up the courage to ask.</p>
<p>when meeting new people, i usually get an awkward stare.</p>
<p>i would simply say when instead of while.</p>
<p>sounds like you have a powerful essay - great opening sentences-grabbers</p>
<p>Thanks for the help!</p>
<p>good luck!</p>
<p>let me try! I am greeted with an awkward stare whenever I meet new people/ meeting new people. good luck!</p>