Quick critique on my essays and I'll love you forever?

<p>I think my essays’ are deeply flawed but I just can’t figure out where or how to change it.</p>

<p>i’d be glad to help…PM</p>

<p>ill help out. pm me and I’ll give you my thoughts.</p>

<p>PM me , I would love to take a look at it</p>

<p>pm me i’ll read it</p>

<p>i will help, but reserve ur love :)</p>

<p>pm me! i’d like to help …where you applying?</p>