<p>So my dad is an immigrant Indian guy and he really wanted to get into the MIT sdm program so he can get a managing degree that has some credibility in the U.S. (he has an MBA from a university in pune, but its apparently not enough for his company).</p>
<p>So anyways he is anxious because of his english that he couldn’t convey his message to the admissions guy over at MIT well enough so he enlisted my help. Now, I consider myself an ok writer but MIT is a different league entirely and I want to ensure my dad that his essay will be alright</p>
<p>See it doesn’t need to be spectacular since he has many other strong points such as having 20+ years of experience in his field (including working side by side with Laxmi Mittal for anyone who knows who that is).</p>
<p>Basically thats the whole story, so anyone want to read it and see if its ok?</p>