<p>I am halfway done with my essay, and I was wondering what you guys though of my into.:</p>
<p>“A personal experience that gives me a feeling of great achievement” I thought to myself as I waited for the school bus. The cool October air brushed against my face, yet I hardly noticed it because I was deep in thought, pondering possible solutions. It was a question I had been asking myself for the past several days, yet I was unable to come up with that ‘just right’ answer.</p>
<p>Well, it depends on the rest of your essay. It’s incredibly hard to give a comprehensive answer when you don’t know what everything is referring too, and so on.</p>
<p>But from the looks of it, it’s not poorly written at all, but it seems more tailored to a “dilemma you pondered” topic, not an achievement essay.</p>
<p>But I could be wrong, 'cause I haven’t seen the rest! :)</p>
<p>Is this going to be an essay in which you acknowledge that you’re writing an essay? If so, that’s just a personal pet peeve of mine; there’s nothing wrong with that sort of essay, I s’pose, but I don’t like them. In light of that, 3. It’s nicely worded, though.</p>