Read an essay or two?

College Essays
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<p>I’ve got two essays that I was hoping someone could read them over for me. If you want to read just one… you can choose between… </p>

<p>A coffee house meeting with DaVinci, Picard and Franklin. (shorter)</p>

<p>OR</p>

<p>One that starts “Daring adventures, impressive skill, bravery and a happily ever after, it still sounds good to me.”</p>

<p>If you meet my post count minimum (100, for trust reasons) and are interested in it, let me know.</p>

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<p>Im interested. Please send me the essays by PM</p>

3

<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I have issues with the punctuation of that first line. The comma is messed up. PM it to me and I’ll read it (or both of them).</p>

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<p>interesting topic, send both of them to me</p>

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<p>Vector, I am not going to send it to you as I know you applied to the same University as I did.</p>