Read and critique my essay please? I'll read yours too if you'd like

I just started my personal statement so there isn’t really a lot but the general idea is i’m writing about how having Cholinergic urticaria (an allergy to sweat) has made me stronger and inspired me to do research later on. Please give me suggestions on the possible direction of the essay because I’ve tried to add humor to it as well.

Thank you I will read your personal statement too if you’d like!

I’d love to!

I’d love to too!

Me too :slight_smile: