Read/critique my Brown supplement essay?

<p>It is the one with the prompt:</p>

<p>" Sculptor Jacques Lipchitz once said, “Cubism is like standing at a certain point on a mountain and looking around. If you go higher, things will look different; if you go lower, again they will look different. It is a point of view.” With this in mind, describe a moment when your perspective changed."</p>

<p>Can someone look it over and let me know what you think? Thanks and I will look over yours need be.</p>

<p>Hey yea I can read your essay! Would you mind helping me shorten mine? I will pm you.</p>

<p>i can help pm me</p>

<p>I can read/edit it too. I have a UChicago essay I want some advice on. You can pm me if interested. :)</p>

<p>never mind…i submitted</p>