<p>It’s entitled, “Greatness requires misanthropy.”</p>
<p>Just some general concerns:</p>
<li>Is it too un-traditional?</li>
<li>Do I sound pretentious or overwrought?</li>
<li>Am I being too general?</li>
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<p>I’ll PM those who ask.</p>
<p>Oh! This is a transfer essay, btw.</p>
<p>I can help you out. I’ll edit/give feedback. I swear, I won’t disclose anything (after all, I’m done.)</p>
<p>PM it. =]</p>
<p>I would like to proof read it for you… please PM</p>
<p>Er, Sethosayer, follow Aspen D’s advice. Nothing against you bestdev, but you’re still a transfer doing apps…and it’s a bit dubious.</p>
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<p>You can PM it to me. I’ll help. (I’m done with college essays by the way, so don’t fear it being plagiarized).</p>
<p>In response to your overall questions:</p>
<p>1 - No, but follow my PMed criticism
2 - No
3 - No, it was very vivid and detailed</p>
<p>pm it to me ill read it for u</p>
<p>I will too :)</p>
<p>i’ll read it. PM me. where are you applying to at this late date?</p>