Read my Common App essay about chocolate?

College Essays
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<p>Well, it’s sort of about chocolate. Chocolate is involved.
It’s over the word count, so I need help shortening it as well.</p>

2

<p>I will read it.</p>

3

<p>Thank you. I got it down to 500 words.</p>

4

<p>I will read it.</p>

5

<p>I want to read it :D…</p>

6

<p>I’m going to resurrect this because the essay has evolved a little. Any takers?</p>

7

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

8

<p>If you still want some new eyes I would be happy to read it</p>

9

<p>What an interesting topic, I’d love to read it!</p>

10

<p>Pm me! I’ll read it! It sounds interesting</p>

11

<p>I’ll read it! I love chocolate haha</p>

12

<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.:D</p>

13

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

14

<p>Thank you for sharing. That was amazing! A simple topic, yet it seemed to have such a profound impact on your life. I also loved your descriptions; I felt like I could see what was happening :blush: what schools are you applying to?</p>

15

<p>I want to read it! I love chocolate!!</p>

16

<p>I’ll be happy to read it!</p>

17

<p>It must an awesome essay if it’s about the chocolate. I would love to read it :)</p>

18

<p>If it’s about chocolate, who wouldn’t want to read it? I’m in!</p>

19

<p>What a mouthwatering topic :-)</p>

20

<p>i’d read it!!! im a chocoholic hahaha</p>