Read my common app essay about Pennies?

College Essays
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<p>I am finishing up the final draft of my common app essay, ( it can be altered to fit several different prompts). And need advice on the structure and educate, and possibly how to shorten it! </p>

<p>If anyone is interested in reading it I will PM you the essay as soon as possible! </p>

<p>Thanks in advance! :)</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>@halcyonheather: </p>

<p>Thanks! I haven’t forgotten to read yours. I just wanted to finish writing mine first, just to avoid any accidental correlations between my essay and anyone else’s!</p>

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<p>i can read it!</p>

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<p>Ok, I PM’d both of you! Thanks</p>

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<p>i will read it</p>

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<p>hey i can’t pm you because i don’t have enough posts or something. do u want minor corrections posted here? they don’t reveal your essay or anything</p>

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<p>@VHSgrad2014</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>@sammo: </p>

<p>Umm, how many posts do you have total?</p>

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<p>@wimmiet: </p>

<p>I’m PM’ing you!</p>

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<p>I can read your essay. Can you read mine?</p>

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<p>Ill read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. @yangmaster I’ll read yours too.</p>