Read my Common App essay for Stanford, Carnegie Mellon, Cornell?

<p>We'll I've done my best on this essay, and I'd appreciate some feedback/criticism/comments. Comment here, I'll pm it to you.</p>

<p>Would you be willing to do a trade?</p>

<p>Sure, pm me your essay.</p>

<p>ill take a look at them</p>

<p>I'll look at it</p>