Read my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>I’m applying to Brown, Caltech, MIT, and eleven other schools, and I’ve got the stats to match. Unfortunately, one of my weakest academic subjects is writing, so I’d love to have some help critiquing my Common Application essay for style, flow, etc. As far as I know, I haven’t made any grammatical errors, so I’m really looking for help with the rhetorical side of things.</p>

<p>Post below and I’ll PM you my essay. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read and provide critique </p>

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<p>Bumping. :)</p>

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<p>I can read</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>I’ll read!!</p>

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<p>I’d love to take a look at it. Could you send it over?</p>

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<p>I can have a look .Me a parent of D in college</p>

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<p>I can take a look if you still need input</p>

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<p>Professional proofreader and college student. I’ll give it a shot!</p>