<p>I’m reluctant to get this critiqued by those who know me because I’ve written about my mental disorder. So I’m hoping you guys can critique it for me.
I have written it in a way that avoids deliberately soliciting sympathy for what I experienced and focused on how I have become the person I am today.
If you can, please let me know if you believe otherwise.</p>
<p>Bump 10char</p>
<p>are you going to post your common app personal statement?</p>
<p>I’d (peer) review it if you send it to me.</p>
<p>i’ll read it!</p>
<p>hpyscm - I’m pm’ing it</p>