<p>I finished mine over a month ago. I don’t know why but I’m still not satisfied with it. It’s TOO long, maybe that’s why. But, I don’t know what to take out and how to make it better.</p>
<p>Anyone willing to help? Let me knowww !</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>I would be happy to offer some constructive criticism. PM your essay to me. Thanks!</p>
<p>i’ll check it out. my common app was 815 and fine.</p>
<p>Sure, PM your essay to me and I’ll be glad to comment on it.</p>
<p>I am happy to read it over and offer my opinion/advice. PM to me.</p>