Read my CommonApp essay?

<p>I finished mine over a month ago.
I don’t know why but I’m still not satisfied with it.
It’s TOO long, maybe that’s why.
But, I don’t know what to take out and how to make it better.</p>

<p>Anyone willing to help?
Let me knowww !</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I would be happy to offer some constructive criticism. PM your essay to me. Thanks!</p>

<p>i’ll check it out. my common app was 815 and fine.</p>

<p>Sure, PM your essay to me and I’ll be glad to comment on it.</p>

<p>I am happy to read it over and offer my opinion/advice. PM to me.</p>