Read my essay for content?

College Essays
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<p>I’ve been struggling for a while about what to write about for my main personal essay. I applied to college last year as well, and I wrote an extracurricular essay (~500 words) that I was proud of, and I’m thinking about expanding it a bit to be my main personal essay this year (I’m not applying to any of the same schools as I did last year). I’m not sure if it works well as a personal statement or if it’s too cliché at the end, so I was wondering if someone would like to read it for me. If people think the topic is okay, I will change it around, so style/grammar issues don’t matter that much to me now (of course, if you see something glaring and you can’t help yourself, then that’s okay, haha).</p>

<p>I don’t care if you’re also applying to college this year, but I only feel comfortable sending my essay to trusted, high-post members. Thank you so, so much in advance :)</p>

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<p>As much as I hate doing this… bump.</p>

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<p>Do you think you could read my essay also?</p>

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<p>Uh sure, but I have a lot of essays that are already in my inbox (I only respond on weekends since I worked at a high school full-time), so I may not get back to you until next weekend. Please also send me the prompt to which you’re responding and the word limit.</p>

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<p>Can I have a try lol?</p>

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<p>I can read it and give you some suggestions. </p>