Read my essay for me? please

<p>I don’t have high GPA and SAT, but I have many ECs</p>

<p>I want to know will this essay improve my chance…</p>

<p>so please tell me how you feel about my essay.</p>

<p>I was choosing between </p>

<p>PS. I came to US 3 years ago…so I don’t speak perfect English, my grammar in my essay might be incorrect…
sorry for that…</p>