<p>Could someone please read and critique my college essay. The essay is for the common app (mainly U of Miami). I chose the option to write about an issue of personal concerns and its importance to you. I wrote about state lotteries and how they should be banned. I am also 30 words over the 500 word limit so any sentences or words I can delete would be nice to know. Thanks!</p>
<p>Hey, I’m going to be applying to U Miami as my top choice as well. Just pm me your essay and I’ll read it :)</p>
<p>I’m only a high school junior, so maybe my opinion doesn’t mean much, but I’ll be happy to read it as well. Just PM it over. :)</p>
<p>PM to me. I’ll read it</p>