Read my essay please

Colleges & Universities Yale University
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<p>Would anyone be so kind to read my essay, and tell me what you think. Thanks ! In advance </p>

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<p>how have you already written an essay? they don’t come out until august…</p>

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<p>The CA essays changed last year, and the Y supplemental essay has been the same for quite awhile. No guarantees of course, but it’s likely they’ll remain the same next year.</p>

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<p><a href=“http://www.insidehighered.com/quicktakes/2014/02/12/common-application-will-keep-essay-prompts#sthash.V8nwXGxy.dpbs”>http://www.insidehighered.com/quicktakes/2014/02/12/common-application-will-keep-essay-prompts#sthash.V8nwXGxy.dpbs&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>ok, well, the prompt doesn’t matter for the CA anyway, I guess. As my yale regional officer said, they’ll read anything they get.</p>

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<p>Can i read it? </p>

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<p>I am willing to offer you my evaluation of the essay, PM me for details.</p>

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<p>sure, willing to read it </p>

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<p>I’d be willing to, and I can offer some good constructive criticisms. PM me.</p>