<p>Hey please read my essay. I need to turn it in by tonight. Any suggestions are appreciated. I am applying to early action at Yale. The essay is about 400 words and the prompt is generic – “tell us about you.”</p>
<p>Private message me if you can. Thank you very much.</p>
<p>Edit: my essay just needs final polishing. I’m not looking for major creative overhauls here. Just a pair of new eyes that can spot things that need fixing.</p>