Read my extracurricular essay?

<p>For a few schools I applied to, their supplement was the typical "briefly elaborate on an EC 250 words". I wrote about a special needs camp I volunteer at over the summer (600+ service hours on transcript) and I was wondering if anyone can read over it just so I can make sure it makes sense to someone who isn't me? Thanks</p>

<p>i’d like to read it.</p>