Read my first successful draft, please?

College Essays
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<p>Finally! I fully wrote out one of my essay ideas. I’ve conceived so many, but all of them have been stillborn or miscarried. A fair warning: it’s a first draft at its worst, pounded out in about an hour. Tear it apart and make radical suggestions. I can take this essay in many directions.</p>

<p>I’d like to limit the amount of readers to 4. Could at least one person fanatically proofread for grammar and punctuation? (I get seriously confused with quotation marks.)</p>

<p>If you’d like a quick paraphrase, the essay’s about my insecurities that came with being labeled as “highly gifted” from an early age.</p>

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<p>sure…pm me :)</p>

<p>(do return the favor though :P)</p>

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<p>Sure, no problem.</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>I will, read mine too, please</p>

<p>Sent from my HTC Incredible S using CC App</p>

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<p>I’ll read, pm it over</p>

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<p>hey Clepsydra
i read ur essay n replied with my feedback. but im not sure if u got it or not since my internet is being weird. please let me know if u got it…otherwise il try doin it agn :)</p>

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<p>I got it, tasmar. Thanks. :)</p>

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<p>I’ve got time if you want me to read it! We could proofread each other’s if you want.</p>