Read my Princeton Supplemental Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Would someone be willing to read and criticize my supplemental essay for Princeton? I’ll pm the essay. Here was the prompt:
3. Using the quotation below as a starting point, reflect on the role that culture plays in your life. “Culture is what presents us with the kinds of valuable things that can fill a life. And insofar as we can recognize the value in those things and make them part of our lives, our lives are meaningful.” - Gideon Rosen, Stuart Professor of Philosophy, chair of the Council of the Humanities and director of the Program in Humanistic Studies, Princeton University.</p>

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<p>Sure thing Bud. You might want to ask your English Teachers too. Since it is PRINCETON L:</p>

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<p>I can read it but I would also suggest asking your teacher for help too…</p>

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<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. </p>

<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you would like. Seems like you have a couple people though. Definitely have a English teacher or guidance counselor look at it too!</p>

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<p>PM me the essay and ill read over it! :)</p>