<p>Are there any senior members/adults out there who would be willing to volunteer their time to critique my essay? I would like brutally honest opinions. Please include first impression, pros, and cons. I also need help trimming it down by exactly 100 words. Thank you so much in advance!!</p>
<p>Bump?</p>
<p>I don’t know if I’m a “senior member,” and I’m not an adult, but I’ve edited many an essay, and I’d be glad to help! </p>
<p>Is 21 an adult? I don’t know, I think it is. I’d love to read your essay though.</p>