<p>I’d say this is in between first and second draft. I’m looking for HONEST and possibly even HARSH reviews. Do not sugar coat your critique! I’m applying ED to Cornell. Thanks :)</p>
<p>Oh also I wrote it on how I discovered that I was biracial!</p>
<p>PM it over yo!</p>
<p>Absolutely. Send it over!</p>
<p>Sure. send it.</p>