<p>Does this concluding sentence sound conceited? </p>
<p>"I want art to be part of who I am, and I want there to be a little bit of me in everything I create. "</p>
<p>No, not at all! There should be part of you in all of your work- if there isn’t, then what is it worth?</p>
<p>Call me paranoid XD</p>
<p>I think it sounds fine, for whatever my opinion is worth. :)</p>
<p>I like it.</p>
<p>It depends on the context around this sentence, but in itself, it seems perfectly normal and acceptable.</p>
<p>I like it, and I don’t think it’s conceited in any way.</p>
<p>Good way to end an essay, but you might just consider saying the same thing in a bolder, stronger way:</p>
<p>Art is a part of who I am, and there’s a part of me in everything I create.</p>