<p>Hi. So, I’m a first-gen college applicant and I need some help with my essay. Would anyone like to read my first draft and give me some pointers? Just go ahead and post here and I’ll PM you with the details. I’d really appreciate it!</p>
<p>College List: (These are the top ones…)</p>
<p>Yale University
University of Pennsylvania
Rice University
Oberlin College
Vassar College
Haverford College
Dartmouth College
Amherst College
Cornell University</p>