<p>Hi there,
I was wondering if anyone would be willing to review/critique my common apps essay. I’v edited a few times, but am having trouble cutting down the words (my aim is below 800 words, if not a lot less).
I’m really open to any comments, and would love feedback on it!
Thankyou!</p>
<p>ahh realized limit is 500 words…
Well, if anyone would be willing to just comment on it, I’d be really grateful.
Thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll read~</p>
<p>I’m pretty good at eliminating useless words if you would like me to give it a shot</p>
<p>Let’s give it a whirl! :-)</p>
<p>I’ll help, pm it over</p>
<p>I’d love to read and critique! Send it over :)</p>
<p>Come on… PM meeeeeeeeeeee</p>
<p>You really don’t want to go over 500 words, 550 max. Admissions officers need to see something that helps you stand out from the crowd, and that something is not 300 extra words. Mark Twain once said, “I am sorry that I do not have time to make this letter shorter.” It is even more impressive if you can express yourself succinctly.</p>
<p>Martin F.
Admissions Consultant | Harvard Square Essays
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