review my college essay?

<p>I whipped it up in about 20 to 30 minutes, and would like some advice/criticism on it. Anyone want to help me out? It'd be appreciated.</p>

<p>(I'm kind of new to College Confidential, so would I just send a private message with the essay in the message, or send an attachment, or what?)</p>

<p>My essay is a personal one with 250 or more words, as required.</p>

<p>You can pm it to me:)</p>

<p>i’ll read.</p>

<p>PM it over! I’ll love to read :)</p>