<p>Hi! I have been working for a very long time on my college essay and am in need of some assistance. I have worked directly with a writing tutor, a college consoler, and many English teachers. I was very confident in my essay topic and my actual essay, and just the other day, I showed it to my English teacher as a final review before I submit it to the common app. She said I need to shorten the intro and add more about myself. The thing is, I feel like it is good the way it is. I just need some suggestions and edits on my essay before I submit it. I need a fresh set of eyes. Please let me know if you can do it. I need to submit my essay on the 14th of November, and I’m really stressed out. Any help would be much appreciated. The essay is 640 words.</p>
<p>I can look it over!</p>