<p>Please send me a private message if you’re interested! I really need someone to look over mine, I’m starting to get extremely numb to it after having read it for way too many times… I’ll read yours too, and give some detailed comments on how to improve. Thanks!</p>
<p>Send it over raitapaita - I don’t an essay for you to read though if that’s okay with you.</p>
<p>Send it over</p>