Review my essay please?

<p>I gotten a lot of mixed comments about my common app essay. I initially had a lot of confidence in it, but no longer do. I’m 50-50. Anyone care to have a read?</p>

<p>I’ve gotten*</p>

<p>sure</p>

<p>I can read it!</p>

<p>My essay is the exact same way!! 50-50 i understand what u mean…see my post actually <a href=“Unconvential common app essay: central story? - College Essays - College Confidential Forums”>Unconvential common app essay: central story? - College Essays - College Confidential Forums; haha…but i would love to read it, let me know</p>

<p>I’ve PMd all of you. Thanks!</p>