Review my Essay

Hey does anyone mind helping me with my ApplyTexas Essay? I’m working on it and am halfway through but my hook is about mantis shrimp- which is pretty weird and i dunno how it is. The topic is discuss how your current EC will help you achieve your lifetime goals. PM me if you wanna help ( plus Id totally be willing to review anything if you guys needed it). Thanks!

I’d be willing to read it. PM with your draft. Mantis shrimp. How very interesting.