<p>My personal statement is comparing my life metaphorically with basketball: the sport I love.</p>
<p>Would anyone mind reading my college essay and giving it feedback and critique it? I will do the same for you.</p>
<p>Bump…</p>
<p>I will (:
And can you please read mine ??</p>
<p>of course as soon as I receive some feedback :)</p>