Review my short answers, please?

*Special circumstances that affect your family’s ability to fund your college expenses
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I am the oldest child of four children living with my single mother. To save money, we recently moved into our Grandmother’s home when my little sister was diagnosed with an autoimmune disease.With the medical bills and having two seniors in the house, there is a significant burden on my family’s finances. My mother works two jobs to support our family and will have another child attending college in the fall of 2017.
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Why have you chosen to apply to The University of Texas-San Antonio?
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I hope to take advantage of the outstanding marketing program UTSA has to offer. While gaining a quality education close to home that will benefit my goals.
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Why have you chosen your academic major(s) of Marketing and Art?
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An art and marketing major will benefit my future career as a Marketing Manager. My artistic ability can give me a competitive edge in identifying marketing strategies. (This one I need major help…)
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Briefly describe any educational plans you have beyond earning your Bachelor’s degree.
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I plan to pursue my Masters degree in Marketing and to attain an internship to gain hands-on knowledge in the marketing field.
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What are some of your life goals and objectives?
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My life goals are to earn my Masters in marketing and gain a successful career as a marketing manager. I hope to work for companies such as Disney or Cartoon Network because I also have an interest in animation and I hope to have my own show.

Hey, your first short answer is really good. I feel like all the others are too generic. You still have some words left for each, so add something that they might not see a lot.