<p>I wrote this personal essay to show the colleges who I am really am. I used the subject of the contents of my purse to indirectly describe my personality. Can someone please help me to revise it and give me some more advice to make it better? I’ll email it to you!</p>
<p>I can…well, what is the school?</p>
<p>i mean, if it doesn’t run into my list.which are all strong in international politics…you can trust me~</p>
<p>The colleges I sent it to:
Clemson, Auburn, UD</p>