<p>Hey I am new to this site, and to be honest the only reason I joined was to get my paper revised. It is due Monday the 24, and what I thought was an excellent essay when I went into the writing center in my college, the tutor there ended up picking apart my essay and killing my hopes and dreams of it ever being an “A” paper. </p>
<p>-So, I would really like it if I can email you my paper, and you give me some help, anything you can add to make it better, please! </p>
<p>-I also have 2 more appointments for Thursday and Friday for 30 minutes at the Writing center, but I need to get more help, this is a big % of my grade and I can not afford to make anything less then an A-.</p>