<p>I’m asking here because all of you have been so helpful to me with my previous questions. I have written my Rice essay (for ED) for several weeks now, and have been editing it continuously since then. However, I’m not very proud it, even though I have been fiddling with it forever and just looking at it makes me dizzy.</p>
<p>I plan to send in the application tomorrow morning, so I know it is quite late to ask for a lot of help. But if any of you could read over it and give me your general impressions of it, I would be most grateful. It doesn’t need to be detailed or anything - I’m just not sure my essay is any good, and considering all the other aspects of my application are bland, I need my essay to distinguish me from other applicants.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>