<p>So this is the third personal statement I wrote. I included parts of the old one, but yeah.</p>
<p>I’m doing ED for this school so I’m looking to get this done by this week! If you can read it, and give feedback/edit asap, that would be great.</p>
<p>I don’t know if I’m still too cliche or not. I tried to stay away from it, but a fresh set of eyes would help.</p>