<p>I'm writing in response to a Common App prompt, that goes like
"Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced, and its impact on you"</p>
<p>It's a rough draft, and I know it could use a few revisions, but I wanna know if it's even worth it to consider editing, because the experience that I wrote about...well it can either really give me a boost, or set me back for the college I send it to.</p>
<p>Would anyone not mind reading it, through PM, and give me some feedback? Thanks!</p>