Risque essay? I need last minute critiques.

College Essays
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<p>I want to know if it makes sense. Anyone? :)</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>Bumpity bump! I promise it’s intersting!</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>serise speaks th truth, it is interesting…lol.</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>Thanks guys <3</p>

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<p>Bump! Last call before I send it out!</p>