Roomate Essay

<p>Can someone look at my roomate essay? I feel like its waaaay to conversational and not formal enough? Should i take a different approach? I kind of just tell everything about me... I"m willing to completely scrap it and rewrite so just give me your honest opinion if you can :P</p>

<p>do NOT worry about being too "formal". the roommate essay is where you can go wild a bit :) conversational is good. mine was definitely more on the crazy side than the other two supplementals</p>

<p>Oh yay you're willing to rewrite it! (It's a nice change...) Just be sure that you'll have enough time to do so! You can send it to me if you want. :D</p>

<p>It's supposed to be pretty conversational I think. I can read it!</p>

<p>All 3 of mine are really philosophical and deep. Evenso, I have complete confidence in all of them.</p>