Roommate Essay

<p>Can anyone look over my roommate essay? I tend to make abrupt transitions, so any critique on the flow of my essay would be appreciated.</p>

<p>anyone willing to help me? It is a short essay.</p>

<p>I’ll look at it if you look at mine!</p>

<p>^Alright, let’s trade.
I just sent you mine.</p>

<p>Either of you still want to swap? Mine desperately needs cutting and I’m just so bad at that.</p>

<p>What are my chances with 1780 on SAT?</p>

<p>Yes, send me your essay. :)</p>

<p>@gaurav22: It never hurts to try and your SATs don’t mean everything. How are your other stats?</p>